Cover Idea No. Four

This cover I do like, I dont think it looks as exiting as the others purely because it has no color in it.
Garion spends most of his younger years being followed by a dark man on a dark horse that appears in the shadows, watching him. This Cover displays one of those moments. The fact this man is following Garion becomes an important plot point towards the end of the story so I think would make a good cover piece. My issue with this drawing is though, like the second cover, that I worry that its focus on character will make it look a bit cartoony and not have the "book cover" aesthetic.

Also, yes I know I need to put the authors name at the bottom, I completely forgot.